Forgotten (Pleiades)

by Simon Hayes   Apr 3, 2006


Flattened hopes of something dear
Frail dreams which make me fear
Fear the silence in your eyes
Freeze my soul and hypnotize
Ferocious winds hold me back
Facing doom, the deadly black
Forever now forgotten

© Simon Hayes 03/04/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    A nice one
    all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I love this. the flow is perfect and i love how you repeat fear. i sounds soo good. i would tell you which lines i liked, but i liked all of it soo...awesome

    btw thanks for all your comments :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this was short...but really deep and to the point, i love it...rhymes well..keep it up and take care! Thanx for the comment..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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