Comments : The phone call

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Wow...that's REALLY good...your an awesome writer...keep up the good work!...you got some awesome poems...and thank you SO much for leaving that comment...when npeople tel lme im doin good and stuff..it makes me feel better and try harder...but thanx again :)...bye
    ~!*Megan*!~

  • 18 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    Wow... I really like this poem. I think it shows a lot about how people don't always get the person they really like. But at the same time... I really like the character in this peom because she doesn't let it get to her and she wont let it bring her down... she's okay with the fact of just being friends with this guy...

    (As you shut your eyes,
    the end of a another unsuccessful day.
    Still you quietly thank God,
    for sending him your way!)...

    and I think that's a great message for some of us girls to hear.. I really liked this work! Good job!