This is a unique poem. i like how you made the reader kind of feel like a dreamy mood while reading it as well. this poem brings fresh flavor to the site which is always good because it makes it more intresting. i'm really glad i chose to read this piece. it's an excellent write.

~Jacklyn

That was a fantastic poem. I love the language you use- i wish i could use it like that. I read your profile thingy and i agree with you about not reading the featured ones-the unfeatured i find more interesting. Therefore this is why i read this poem and wow-result. Thankyou.

Wonderful, your use of language in this is absolutely spectacular. I found that very impressive, it created a pleasant, dream-like atmosphere for your poem, I am envious of your talent. Keep writing :)

Very nicely written, great imagry!! all over good write!!