by sarah poe Apr 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Kill me while I'm Innocent keep me alive while I'm not watch me bleed from my arms watch me scream with tears I have never felt so much pain in years as you watch the blood slowly run down my face you wonder why it has happened this way I'm not some one who u can push around and hurt any longer i do not want this pain en more some one take it away make it leave and never comeback because I'm sick of it and as you already know i dont evan know why im hear |
by Becca
Tis a fairly decent poem, maybe you could check some spelling and sort some kind of paragraphing, but overall it was good. w.done. |
Very good ... i there could be more tho |
by Renee Kotva
Wow...... thats a lot of feelings mixed in there. Its really good though. I can tell you that I have a pain too. If you need someone who will listen to you I will be there. |