by rocker666chick Apr 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I am not welcome anymore |
by Stabbylou
I like the meaning and emotion of the poem, but I think your poetry suffers a little by trying to rhyme. Most of them work but a couple seem hollow. However the flow is cool and your poems still make for a great read. Don't stop writing. 5/5 |