Aw! That is soooo sweet! You are going to have to read mine now. Good job! (-;

Ah, thx for commenting on my poem i really appreciate it and thx for adding me to ur favourites

ps:i love all ur poems!!!

love
micky

This poem is good and i had and still have that going on with me

This poem is so sweet...I love it. It kept my attention and it reminded me about myself.

Great job! 5/5

Amazing poem, it was so sweet and nice, and had a goood meaning to it, keep up the good work. I oculd really relate to it a lot, ive done that before, its weird huh?

**meggie**

Awww... this is so adorable! i loved it and i can so relate! :P i become such a clutz when im around my crush.. hehe.. this was filled with emotion, flowed well, and had good imagery!

There is just some strang, odd reason
^ here, i think you just missed an "e" on the end of "strang"

nice write! 5/5

Aww this was cute! I know the feeling, I've experienced it so many times. Its nice to look back on those days in life. They always give you a smile. Keep it up! xxx

This poem was pretty decent. I think it put emotions well which can be your strong point but as well as your breaking point. Your descriptions showed more of everyday life where as if you wanted to you could have add some more poetric emotional words to describe what falling in love is really like at least for you.

That was sooo sweet. It reminds me of some of those teenage movies were they really like a guy and they act dorky around them. your on my favs. now! bye
Tiffany

That was sooo sweet. It reminds me of some of those teenage movies were they really like a guy and they act dorky around them. your on my favs. now! bye
Tiffany

This poem describles falling in love and is seemingly based on true experience

the poem flows well

Awww cute i like the end of it.. the last stanza is my favorite..

Hi bloomed rose its me great poem

Awesome!

Aww i love this poem its really kool. nice work

This poem, was amazing. You described it so well. Nicely done!

-Jennifer.

Nice xoxo
aubs