This is great. One of your best poems i've read. I love the way u describe ur life in the poem, This draft of loneliness anger pain and sorrow. It rocks!! I've added you to my favourites now! It'd be nice if u couldmaybe do the same for me!! lol

Imi

Lol wow i love your poems definatly on my favorites list! you express everything really good. 5/5

Wow...you make it sound like your something your not like i dont know a popular kid but you feel empty cause no one takes you seriously well i hope you keep it up!!

Wow absoluely amazing. Well done. I suppose i can relate to this poem in a way. But anyways good job keep it up 5/5

-x-Kelly-x-

An eerie foreboding poem i find this to be... it gives you a sense of a life at school for a nerdy type person... also shows one person who wont trust anybody...excellently written good job

This is good, you make a really strong point here. And I like the way you use "draft" to describe a feeling, it's really effective.

I like ur poem

Great poem seems like something me or my brother would have come up with a few years ago

That was a great poem, I feel the same way, good use of emotion and words. 5/5
Becca x

Hey they sound great see u in the chat room

Excellent poem i know how you feel..

I nearly cried coz that's exactly how i feel today

Hey, i reli lyk dis poems itz so gd!!!
sophzxxx

Yea, all of my poems are true. u should e-mail me then we could talk more. my e-mail is: babybrit_92@hotmail.com
feel free to e-mail me if u ever just need to talk.
love always,
britney
aka
jaqui

The prose is only surpassed by how profound it is

Wow I feel this way it is strange you know because I can relate well keep up the good work!

This poem is really sad. In a way I can relate to it. Keep up the good work kid

Very good poem 5/5