Sweet Dreams

by Darien   Apr 4, 2006


Sweet Dreams

by Darien and Kristy

Wearily, I crawl under the blankets,
trying to forget the events of the day.
Why do the bad times feel so vivid
while the good ones seem so gray?

It doesn't take me long to fall asleep
and drift away to the land of dreams.
At last my body has found its peace,
or at least that's how it seems.

Silenced whispers fly above the clouds,
and sweetly kiss the wind.
The stars are grinning brightly,
like they know that I have sinned.

Suddenly I'm being chased,
by the visions in my mind.
Nothing is safe here anymore.
A place to hide I cannot find.

I sweat but I cannot awake,
this has gotten out of hand.
My eyelids won't open now,
Asleep in another land.

Walking in the darkest of nights,
through a cemetery lie the dead.
This nightmare takes it's toll on me,
I can't get it out of my head.

Death creeps in closer each step,
My body already lying in place.
Just bury me six feet under,
I'll vanish without a trace.

I awake with a sudden jerk,
checking to see if I bleed.
Alive and in the light,
A sigh of relief I breathe.

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  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow...This Poem Deff. Pulls You In! Great Job...I'm Amazed By How Good You Really Are! :D

    I Really Liked This Stanza Of The Poem:
    Silenced whispers fly above the clouds,
    and sweetly kiss the wind.
    The stars are grinning brightly,
    like they know that I have sinned.

    They Were Amazing Lines :D
    Your An Amazing Writer Keep It Up
    I Enjoy Your Stuff :D
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    I loved this poem. It showed lots of emotion and I enjoyed each word. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Why do the bad times feel so vivid
    while the good ones seem so gray?
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    Loved those lines! They were awesome. And then poem itself was good too. Loved it how you decribed it to be a safe place when you fall asleep and then it turns into this horrible nightmare. Awesome poem! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Great collab....I have had many nites like this where I just wanna wake up!!!
    Great Write for the both of you...!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this is awesome! You two did an amazing job with this, very suspenseful.. Excellent collab!