From the beggining you had my undivided attention...
Wearily, I crawl under the blankets,
trying to forget the events of the day.
Why do the bad times feel so vivid
while the good ones seem so gray?
This was the perfect start to your poem...we have all had nights/dreams like this. 5/5

Wow, this is awesome! You two did an amazing job with this, very suspenseful.. Excellent collab!

Great collab....I have had many nites like this where I just wanna wake up!!!
Great Write for the both of you...!!!

Why do the bad times feel so vivid
while the good ones seem so gray?
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Loved those lines! They were awesome. And then poem itself was good too. Loved it how you decribed it to be a safe place when you fall asleep and then it turns into this horrible nightmare. Awesome poem! 5/5

`taleee xx

I loved this poem. It showed lots of emotion and I enjoyed each word. =)

Wow...This Poem Deff. Pulls You In! Great Job...I'm Amazed By How Good You Really Are! :D

I Really Liked This Stanza Of The Poem:
Silenced whispers fly above the clouds,
and sweetly kiss the wind.
The stars are grinning brightly,
like they know that I have sinned.

They Were Amazing Lines :D
Your An Amazing Writer Keep It Up
I Enjoy Your Stuff :D
Love,
Steph