Wow. Rally powerful. To tell you the truth I almost started to cry. It really helped me to see that guys can have a broken heart too! I really loved the last part.

~Thanx for the comment on my poem~

Good work! i can really relate to this one so deeply

Omgg.. ANOTHER sad poem! hehe.. but it was really good.. very very good.. that poor guy.. :( keep up the excellent work!
jessy

Awesome write. I loved it. The ending was just amazing. I love your writting style. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Simply beautiful penned, yet flowed with beautiful emotions, nicely done!

Wow - this was so very well written! Very sad poem, but one that I can think back to a time that unfortunately I am able to relate to.