Just a dream

by Mark   Apr 4, 2006


We share the same dream,
The dream of being together.
We share the same dream,
The dream of us forever.

We share the same dream,
The dream of seeing each other.
We share the same dream,
The dream of having a lover.

We share the same dream,
The dream of the world in our hands.
We share the same dream,
The dream of the loving fans.

We share the same dream,
The dream to have a dream,
We share the same dream,
The dream of our love, as it may seem.

We share the same dream,
The dream to believe in life,
We share the same dream,
The dream with out a knife.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Dont listen to MY1&only becasu eit was amzing i love it WHAT AM I SAYING I LOVE YOUR POEMS (all of them) there so good you have a wonderfull talent hunnie!! xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Niiiiiiice! good job on this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I know the poem is supposed to be about some kind of dream but you really don't need to repeat it in every line or every other line. It kind of takes the impact away. You should try seperating or rarely using the important sentences that you feel really do make or symbolize a point. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Loved it!! keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem! i love how u kept using "we share the same dream" over and over. I think u can improve it by keepin close to the same amount of syllabals in each line caz it makes the poem flow better

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