Wow. This is another poem that really tends to me. Its so strong, powerful and extremely well written. The used of vocubulary(spelling) is wide and I enjoy that kind of sense to eat. Like you elborate it. I love it.

'I gently run the blade across my wrist, tracing the faded scars that lie embedded in my skin from the past'

I really like those lines, they have something I can't describe. well done.

5/5

Very good poem its very expressive. well done

DANG THATS DEEP! 5/5

I know!! I am deep lol! When i want to be anyways!!!

That is a very good poem and yes i understand it lol. brill!

I understand this poem, it's just a tiny bit complex if you don't have a imagination, it is really good! so don't change it! and if any-one critises it then just ignore them!! they are probably jelous!

This is so inspirational! I have recently got over an addiction to pot, so i know exactly what it is like not to be understood. You bring me oxygen in a world full of carbon dioxide! I love you Imogen Bishop-White. You are my hero!

respec'

untill next time we meet

xxx

This made my cyber love life filled day just PERFECT! i think that you could be my true cyber sweetheart. If your interested send me a picture on albyhornblower@fsmail.net and if you have a webcam I'm all yours, babe! xxx

This is my favourite poem that i've read in a while. welcome to my favourites.

This is pain.
Having nothing, knowing nothing.
Nothing to live for, nothing to die for.

I love this part^^^^ I cant really explain how im feeling right now, but your poem really touched me. Great work and dont change anything about it, its totally going on my favs. 5/5