Looking at myself

by Nearly but not quite   Apr 4, 2006


Far from you
And far from home,
Away from the life
That I call my own.

Floating free
Above my body
Seeing, detached
Myself, wrecked and bloody.

Strange to see me there,
And watch him standing over me,
Holds a knife in his hand
My blood still flowing freely.

Please comment and vote, if you have any constructive criticism then it would be very much appreciated too, and I will always return the favour.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    It is good. but what exactly are you talking about? being killed or being far from home

  • O wow this is really good, it kind of reminds me of an out of body experience.
    xX velvet kisses Xx

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