X My Glass Ceiling . . .

by Sole   Apr 4, 2006


You told me something long ago
Which tickled the back of my mind
A metaphor, an obstacle
Which has improved with time

You gave as a gift to help me
Write the perfect poetry line
An image, didn't understand
But now it works just fine

Now I can relate to the phrase
And I realised it yesterday
All I need is a new poem
To find the words to say

Now I've found the perfect context
Perfect poem, perfect feeling
Perhaps you saw it long ago
But you are my glass ceiling

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  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow that is awesome...again not much to say...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    An interesting write, I did wonder what you were getting at until the last line, and it fell into place.

    The second stanza seems to have some words missing in the first and third lines, but it might just be me...

    Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    You gave as a gift to help me
    Write the perfect poetry line
    An image, didn't understand
    But now it works just fine

    ^^ My favorite Stanza. This poem had a wonderful poem, and I enjoyed it a lot. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    Took several reads to fully understand, but once i understood the meaning it was a well written message.

  • 18 years ago

    by "."mýstíç"."

    Beautifully done

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