Nice job.. not somthing I'd see everyday but nice work

Beautiful poem. Good Job

Wow.. just.. WoW.

I absolutely LOVE this poem. The descriptions and the flow of it is amazing.. I love how you contrast the two stanzas when you are really talking about the same thing, but in a different light each time. Like positive, negative. I love that, especially with the descriptive words and colors I see in this poem. AMAZING; absolutely, marvelously wonderful job =)

I like how you have portrayed water as both the giver of life and the bringer of death!!