Wow! I really like this piece. The wording is so strong! Its difently a great write of yours. Keep it up doll.

And thanks,for the comment doll.

5/5

Kat

Nice poem, I liked how you wrote it

That's pretty good. I liked it even though it was sad. You could make a song out of that. Anyway nice job 5/5
-Vino

Wow this is amazing its very powerful and i love it

WOw good job!
i like how you used repitition in the 3rd and 4th lines of each stanza: suppresses___ & suffocates___
it makes the whole meaning of the poem stronger.
ery deep and sad . i couldnt write anything like that when i was 13 which was only two years ago but two years ago i sucked (hehe) anyways, greAt job
~HazE