Wow...nice poem. a lot of emotion...all of your poems are wonderfully written and equally amazing. you're very talented with your writing. and i really appreciate your comment, i needed to hear some words of encouragement. you don't know how much that helped me...
well awesome poem once again, and thanks! 5/5
lauren

Wow is the word that comes to mind. Powerful. Triumphant. resounding like a battlecry. Victory is already yours. 5/5

For even if i fall.........
I will rise!!!

That is awesome!!! I loved the ending, but great poem overall

What a great poem with such a triumphant resolved ending, i loved the strong emotions that echoed throughout this