Inside of Him

by Eru Shan Messarik   Apr 4, 2006


He slits his wrists and says goodbye. Tonight this boy knows he is going to die.
He lies down next to her and says I love you, bleeding but her not noticing,
Crying softly while she sleeps,
His life draining away lying next to the one he loves,
Slowly becoming nothing,
An empty shell, he's almost there,
Something that he would never of dared,
Until that fateful night 3 days ago,
Or was it 4 or 5,
He no longer remembers,
No longer cares,
She broke his heart and yet she does not know,
His blood from his wrists is beginning to slow,
Tears stop,
His breath does too,
This girl will know,
He left a note saying,
This was because of you..

This poem was a suicide poem i wrote a few years back... it is not the best because i could barely stay conscious. anyways please vote

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    Again, 5/5. keep it up!!

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    by TaInTeD lOve

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