Let Me Give the Final Tear

by Juls   Apr 4, 2006


There is more to life than crying
So when I die don't shed a tear
Save them for all the happy things
that you will see for many years
Send a prayer to up above
I'll sure to get it quick
For I am soon, no longer a person
Now an angel that exists

I'll be your guardian angel now
Right with you everyday
So don't shed any of these tears
When I'm only a prayer away
If I don't give you an answer
Ask the man up high
God would be his name here in sky
So don't shed a tear when I die

Be happy that I lived
Stayed strong for so long
but I had to give in sometime
I felt like I was losing it all
Let me be the one that
Gives one final tear tonight
As I put this rope around my neck
Hang there till I reach the end

Death

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxLivxx

    Incredible poem
    i love it in every sense.
    thank you for helping the flow mine! when i put it in 3,3,4,3,3 it did seem to flow better. i appreciate your help and i left you a 5 on this particular poem because i like it very much!
    ok well i gotta go
    x3keep writingx3
    _brokensoul_

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow great poem. it was really emotional, but v.well written! 5/5,
    take care hun
    xEmmaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Good job! I enjoy your work! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey good poem juls! except it was really sad! *tear* lol but yea it was a realy well written piece! keep it up hun *hugs* ruthie xoxo

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