Wow alot of emotions great word choice

great write

5/5

~GLASS~

I absolutely love the last stanza. besides that you have amazing imagery => word choice. beautiful.

You have your way with words. Your words just fit together so perfectly. 5/5

~ Tina

Wow, Kaylee!! This is simply amazing. Magnificent! You know, words really are inadequate. I can't think of any to describe how wonderful this poem is.

Excellent imagery - great poem, such beauty :( I only wish I could write like you **Is Jealous**.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow! Emotional and deep. The title perfect, the poem ever so enjoyable. Incredible writing :)

Built me up to break me down..I felt strongly the emotions expressed. Good job 5/5

Awesome, this poem is filled with emotion. I could picture the whole thing. awesome Job.

You know i've got to say, your poems are the most imaginative poems i've ever read. Just the way you word them, makes me think and I get this image in my head of whats going on. To be able to do that is a hard skill to achieve and you've done it.

This poem was beautiful! Nice use of vocabulary and structure. You expressed every line with such emotion and depth. You definately have a talent. Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

I like the way this poem was written.
With the two words at the top followed by a discription almost.
Very good. Keep writing xoxox

Beautiful. the use of 'its gone' at the end of each stanza was extralmy effective. the imagry (my favorite part of poetry) was beathtaking. i loved it it.

Ruby

I like the use of contrast here and the way it has been written. Great poem from start to finish.

I love your use of puncutaion! great read, awesome! The form of the poem also adds to the way it is read, and makes the feelings so much more real.

thanks for commenting on mine!
~blackrose1011

Wow, I really liked this one! They way you worded it just made it sound so pure and great! I totally loved it! Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

It's so beautifully expressive... good job!! :)

Wow i loved this poem, i dont know exactly what but something made it different to anything i have ever reas, it built up...

well written!

Jacs
xxx

I lik teh idea and flow of teh poem, good job
could you please read/comment/rate my new poem, impulse

Wow. You use alot of emotion and deepth into your writing. It keeps me interested in it. I really like it. and the use of words is really great.

The use of short sentances hammers in every single point. It makes it seems like nothing else is on your mind and also gives the impression of being factual.
Differering the very last line to make it more personal was also extremely effective.

You are so talented Kaylee, keep writing, i love your work
xxxxx