by cat Apr 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I laid my heart on the line for what could hopefully be you and me for just this night I saw the one for me. For this only happens in your dreams. Youre the love that takes over me when youre around its like a fantasy standing hear rate in front of me. |
Wow, short but to the point. it was great. keep up the good work. I would say you should make your poems a little longer though. |