by Kaylee Apr 4, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Seven year old Amy tucked |
I really liked it, great job...5/5 |
by Bridgette
This poem is so sad! I almost cried! I really loved it! The flow was good & the imagery was great too. I love the way you ended it. great job! 5/5* |
I loved the sweet amy story, it was really quite brilliant, that word being mine of highest praise, but the ending bothered me a bit. I know it was your intention to switch to the next one, but it just . . . died for me with that ending. It was so good and then . . . like someone crossed out the rest and said here is a finished poem. Sorry love. |
by amber
Aww it is so wonderful very descriptive and i can totally undrstand it is sweet i love it |
by littlballa
Wow great poem and extremely touching..so much great imagery. you are very talented |