I liked this poem alot i espeacially liked the lines "Golden ring matching the
spirit you have risen in me.
Sun setting on the morning’s past
and the tomorrows still to be."
it was excellent and sweet but had a sad feel to it as well. quite good all in all :)
~jacob

Lovly. you combined the emotions really well and of course your word choice is amazing. :) nice job!

I am speechless...... a beautiful story, very inspirational piece.... it flowed well and keeps the reader interested until the very end...... well done sweetie, well done.

Wow... you really are talented. This was amazing. It's actually the best love poem I have read... and I'm usually not the type to like love poems. But this one is an exception... 5/5

~ Tina

I loved it! The story was so beautiful and flow *sigh* You have so much talent, keep writing, I love reading your wonderful poems!

Beautiful imagery my dear :). I love the very last line 'Sweet Amy will you marry me' it's amazing!
Maiya

This poem was beautiful.

It's different (by the way you wrote it) and unique (by the person you described). One suggestion:

Ten year old Amy was sitting on
the edge of her bed that morning.
Brush running through those
golden curls then falling, to the bed
Staring through the window.
(A comma would make this stanza flow after falling)

You have this talented to create wicked imagery. Poem is sad but beautiful. I have often thought about writing a poem like this.
However I write mostly end rhyme poems (trying to expand my skills tho) so I find it really difficult to write in this style...but you have the skillz girl!!!!

Beautiful - Loved every second of it. The repetition was really effective, and the ending was so happy! I thought it would be really sad - but it was beautiful!

Peace. [Sole]

Wonderful! A beautifull written, remarkable piece! Fantastic story conveyed so nicely in poetry :)

Beautifully written, you are a true poet. I loved the way you used repitition though out the poem.

Great job!! I loved how it told her story!!! You did great details in it to!! I love it when i dont have to wonder because someone didnt think it all the way threw!! You did an excellent job on this one 5/5

keep it up!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wonderful! I luved it, it was very well written and had a lot of deth and meaning. I like you style, its different. Nicely done. It flowed well together. I really like the lines:

"Tears falling down your face
and splashing on the worn blanket.
With the medicine we have
inside these bottles,
we feel you have a chance.
Sweet Amy was told."

It just stuck out to me, interesting to say the least. Keep up the awesome work. 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Im speechless

beautiful. just...
exquisit. so so beutiful

Ruby

This was phenomenal from start to finish. What I love about your poetry is that it is so carefully crafted and every word ooozes emotion. It was an enticing poem and very moving. You were right to change it to inspirational because you and your magnificent poetry do just that for me....inspire...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

When i saw this the length put me off but the stanzas helped. I liked the use of imagery but i kind of stopped following it in the middle because it seemed pretty much all the same. I like most of your work, saying that this is not one of my favourites. (personnel taste)

Wow, very thought-provoking and inspirational but it was too long to include in my contest, i loved it though, keep writing xx

Wow, when i started reading i was unsure of what to think, but after reaching the end, i was pleased i taken time to read, very nice poem i like the imagination you have used
great job
jemma xxx

I loved the imagination in this poem and the last stanza just made me smile lol :) amzing poem written by an amazing poet :) 5/5
now let's read part 2 lol

~StefQ

Great story
great wording
great imagery

superb write

~GLASS~