OMG That was so good! I really liked it. Im not too much of a fan to really long poems, But this one kept my attention all they way through, I really enjoyed reading it.. Cant wait to read the next part =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Brilliant poem. it maintains interest very strongly thoughout not allowing attentin to waver at any point. brilliant imergy and very well written thoughout

I loved this one i dont think you should change anything. 5/5

I like a lot of the images you present in the poem, but it didn't flow to me. I still really, really liked it...but it just didn't feel right. Don't get me wrong, it's one of the best poems I've read in a long time, I just think YOU could do even better.

Absoutly beautifully written. I loved it. this poem has amazing flow. good job.

Awww....its so sweet....i cant wait to read the second part i am right on it...
Emma 5/5

Fantastic... great job, keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Wicked, it was brilliant, loved it, am going to read second part now
xxxx

Wow, you have great talent, your choice of words is excellent...

Wow great poem and extremely touching..so much great imagery. you are very talented

Aww it is so wonderful very descriptive and i can totally undrstand it is sweet i love it

I loved the sweet amy story, it was really quite brilliant, that word being mine of highest praise, but the ending bothered me a bit. I know it was your intention to switch to the next one, but it just . . . died for me with that ending. It was so good and then . . . like someone crossed out the rest and said here is a finished poem. Sorry love.

-Tainted Mikochan

This poem is so sad! I almost cried! I really loved it! The flow was good & the imagery was great too. I love the way you ended it. great job! 5/5*

I really liked it, great job...5/5