So Sad.

But Beautifully Written as Well.

Nicely Done :)

_Disturbed_

Wow.
this was so good. i loved the story.
i loved the layout.

it was so sad tho! made me wanna cry!

well written.

nice job.

I like in the second stanza how you write out can not instead of saying can't. it magnifies the rhythm, which is certainly more than i can say for most. good job.

So so sad... but yet so good...wonderful poem. Jeez, it makes ur heart ache! haha...
5/5
It portrays lotsa emotion!!

--**Skye~

-Pla check out some of my poems!-

Uhmm so yeh i LOVE THIS!!! keep ritting i would love to read more.

Oh, wow!! That was so goooood!! I mean WOW!!!!I absolutely LOVED it!!!!

Excellent poem! i gave it a 5, but i didn't agree with some of the ideas behind it...

I'm going to completely agree with you tim... I was in a rough place a few years ago when i wrote it, I'm glad you said that, not many people dont..... Thnk you so much:)

Quote from maddi " Holy shit" the closer you can relate to something the more it makes you relive it. This is the closest ive been to tears for awhile.
I can honestly say this is the most emotinal a poem has made me feel

Wow that was one of the most powerful poems i have read in a very long time. its always so tragic when people don't tell the ones how they really feel until it is to late. life is so fragile and we never know when we will lose the ones we love. you really did an amazing job!!!! this piece was so powerful, you have got so much talent and such a stunning style of writing. keep it up and take care!! 5/5

Phenominal write 10/5

A good poem..yet very sad:(