OMG! That is the most beautiful thing. I was crying and have been for an hour...but I stopped long enough to really take it all in. I love you so much! I am so so so sorry I haven't e-mailed you in for literally forever. So much has happened I haven't even taken it all in yet. So...be expecting a really long letter sometime soon! And yeah...that poem was about "him". And so is the one I'm getting ready to post. I'll explain it in the letter. Oh, I'm going to e-mail you his name and stuff so you can see his profile on myspace, okay?

Your poems, I'm not kidding, are some of the best IVE EVER READ. The beat is perfect, but the words are what keeps me hooked the most.

Just excellent. xxx

A new poem! Finally!

I must confess I've read this poem three times before writing this comment.

I love how you compare life to a painting. Amazing how you describe all these colours.

You say; "paint me a canvas" with all those colours you mention. And I kept wondering what the painting would turn out like. It was so mysterious.

Then at the end you say "this painting is my life, and it's black"
Wow.. that is so sad.

Such a powerfull end. When I read the end I had to read it again. And while knowing where you were going, reading it twice was so sad.

So beautifully written. I must say I haven't read such good poem in a while.

It's perfect. It's overwhelming. I'm impressed.

Very well done sweety

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Oh my gosh!! im not just saying this but this is really really amazing!!!!!

i love it..
and you.
: )

Oh...my...GOD! excellent! this is definitly one of the best i've read on here. your on my favorites for sure!

Wow this is fantastic. i love it. especially the last line. amazing. i felt my stomach drop. im in love with your poem

That was possibly one of the best poems I have ever read . . . The flow is perfect . . the rhymes are perfect - and the ending is so sad - and yet what a perfect ending. Aboslutely awesome poem - loved reading every second of it.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, this is a different point of view of someones life. I absolutely love it! I'm an art student, so all of the colors and what they symbolize was brilliant and the last stanza just brought it all together. I'm not sure if you saying your life is "black" is a good thing or a bad thing, but either way the symbolism was wonderful and the flow was amazing!

Keep up the great work...I'm adding you to my favs so if you keep writing, I'll keep reading! 5/5

-Much love-
~Kelly~

Wow this is amazing. my favorite poem that you've written. you and amazing, i love you so much!

Hey hun,

I realise I have already commented on this poem. Just wanted to say I love it so much.

I've read it so many time that I just know every phrase of it.

=)

Love you

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Omg! Thsi is one of the best poems I have ever read. I love how you symblolized life whith colors. Wow, amazing.

I may have left you a comment months ago saying 'omfg, I love it! lofficially my fav. poem!' or soemthin' like that. So I decided to go back now and reread it to see if I still like it. This is what I have to say:

Reading it again I can understand it more. But it is still my favorite poem. I expecially love the ending. Love it. Love it. LOVE IT.