Red flowers

by ShadowDancer   Apr 4, 2006


The snow is cold beneath pine trees
and colder still the earth below
yet still the blood red flowers bloom
and lie here scattered in the snow

like drops of blood on pure white skin
these perfumed petals do lie
the vines shedding their ornaments
as they will until winter's chill does die

*wrote this for a poetry game. tell me what you think*

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Its beautiful. I loved it.. great imagry, you paint a very vivid picture with your words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Farrah Kelly

    This poem was reely gd, lved it!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Wowo great imagery. i love it. i can see all of it. its great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    This was beautiful for a nature poem. It might have been written for the poetry game, right? But it stands as a wonderful poem on it's own. I think you'd maybe extended it a bit, it might be better. But even as a short poem, it's really sweet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This poem is simply beautiful. i hope u "won" ur game great poem

    my fav line

    like drops of blood on pure white skin
    these perfumed petals do lie

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