A friend's suicide

by Raychel   Apr 5, 2006


*to hoho and megg and coco. im not going to kill meself so dont freak out. i love yall alot, and i will NEVER, let me repeat NEVER commit suicide. i just felt like writing this. keep fighting no matter what.*

my pain clouds an already stormy sky,
blood pours like im about to die.
excuses are all that u have left,
u have already stolen my heart, u have committed theft.

i made a promise that i couldnt keep,
i made a choice, it was a huge leap.
we were supposed to make it throught together,
but my depression wasnt getting any better.

i love what u did for me all this time,
when it comes to best friends, ur mine.
i will call this my end,
But remember that u will always be my friend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very nice...but please..even if you think it..never try to comit suicide....alright...peoples care about you...but anyways...nice job

    ~matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, Very well written. Keep up the good work.