This is My Life

by TormentedSoul   Apr 5, 2006


If you could see right
into my soul you
would see black and
empty there would be
no light only blackness,
no sign of hope no
sign of anything.
If you could see my heart
it would be made of steel
because it would not
be breakable or be
able to feel any pain.
If you could live my life
you would see the
all pain. There is no
joy or happiness to
speak. There is no
sunny weather in my
world only clouds and rain.
This is my life and its
all ive ever known. This
is all ive ever felt and
all i ever will.

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  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I felt your emotion, yet you still kept your anonimity present. It was very well written, and the style was... ew to me, but I ejoied it. Well done. 5/5

    -Liz-

  • 16 years ago

    by SuperGalacticLoveChild

    This poem is so deep. but 1 question....y do u feel lke its all ull ever feel?

  • 16 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Thanks for the comment i really liked this one it was great=) keep it upp and write some more soon i cant wait to read more love linda

  • 16 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Great poem. 5/5.

    keep it up.

    much love,
    mac.<3
    [.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

  • 17 years ago

    by keep breathing

    I love it.

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