Comments : Pretend

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    This seemed to be written when you had more than half an hour to write it... Get me? lol.

    *hugs* Awesome writing. Really truly.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kesha Nicole

    Very good poem. I know where it's coming from

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    It was weird at first but then it got really good...its good to write wen your feelings are strong thats wat i do, it helps me to express my self in a good way...well your welcome for me commenting lol please return the fav... love ya bye...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe this is so sad. you know i can relate. i love it as always. you are so amazing at writing. and in general. : ) i love this. keep your head up, and email back!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    This is really good, i'm goin thru heartbreak too, i love this verse:
    Shh...
    No one can see
    He doesn't know
    What he's done to me
    ...keep it up, comment on my poems sometime, love sucks ! -hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by jessica

    This is a really good poem. i give you my support

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow...that was a really amazing poem....and you said im good lol...anyway thanx for the comment those poems were just some old ones i had i wrote a new one last night (acctually its a song) butif you wanna check it out im gonna post it soon...well keep up the great work...

    *^*crow*^*

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Really sad...but amazing