Comments : Dark Poetry 3

  • 18 years ago

    by vamp

    I can turn a bright light dim.
    I write upon the shadow's rim.
    I can turn the white to black.
    People whispering "Look at him."
    loved dis bit..nice work
    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Imogen

    Good work

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetangel69

    I like it. it definatly says your not afraid to be your self

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayd

    I love this! It's perfect in it's way, as we all are a little black angels.
    It's not often you find such wonderful use of words

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    The way you worded everything was incredible this poem left me speechless for a few moments there! You really have talent! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    Wow it is an amazing poem i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by zane

    That was hell of good