All thats left

by ChOcOlatE_mousse   Apr 5, 2006


As she sits and cries
her face full of fear
a bathtub full of crimson red
and she slowly sheds her last tear
she told us that she wasnt right
we failed to believe
but little did we know
she was a friend in need
although she gave us hints
every day by day
we didnt realize she was upset
so her life she was to take
'Lauren, what did you do?'
in her death note it did say...
'you didnt believe me looks whats left
'all there is is broken wings'

this is dedicated to my always best friend
Shana (9/6/91-3/4/06)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jake

    Hey Lauren,
    Ur Poem is coolies write more!

  • 18 years ago

    by PersiaN TeardropZ

    Aww....im sooo sorry!!
    always ere 4 ya if u need. xoxo
    take care hun

  • 18 years ago

    by Imogen

    This is so sad but its really good writing. keep it up.

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