My World Falling (we have a winner to the question now guys)

by Cody   Apr 5, 2006


I watch my world crumble and die
I watch the falling of the night sky
and I wonder why

everything I've worked for has falling
striking me till I'm crawling

I have nothing left
and I'm so full of regrets
my perfect world is gone
and I have no way to move on

maybe it is time to visit the 7th circle of hell
a place I will come to know well
To the woods of suicides
the place where my soul will reside

(The first person who can tell me what famous poem I reference in the last verse of this poem will be added to my favorite list and I will comment on all of their poems, tell me in a comment if you know I don't care if you look it up)

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  • 18 years ago

    by ReeneLou

    Also who won was it me? XD lol chiaki xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ReeneLou

    Argh how is this for fate i just finished reading the divine comedy by Dante and that isnt a lie i encourag everyone to read it cos it's amazing then you should read lolita by Vladmir Nabokov cos he refrences it a lot and lolita a great book as well anyway i've finished rambling lol chiaki xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    BTW, Cody I haven't read ALL of the Divine Comedy.... I can't quite do it. I'm kinda lazy! lol!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I LOVE ALL YOUR POEMS! :) I knew the answer to the question, as I love The Divine Comedy! :) 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    MidNightBeauty has won she got it right and was the first one to do it finally it took long enough for someone to I was begging to think I would have to tell someone

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