Okay google offically isn't my bestfriend anymore lol. I have no i dea what poem your alluding to but it sounds wonderful! They rhyming seemed a bit odd in this poem, but that maybe just me! lol

Now on to business! I'm jenn, the head of fish bowl, and I'm here to welcome you to our lovely bowl =) on a few conditions of course, a) please read the welcome message, b) please follow the rules and most importantly, c) HAVE FUN! lol

if you need anything let me know, or my assistants >tornapart and fighter =)

love jenn

I dont know why you have such a low rating..this was an awesome poem i thought.
Maybe i can just relate too well:(
i loved these lines, they worked brilliantly together:
"I have nothing left
and I'm so full of regrets
my perfect world is gone
and I have no way to move on"

take care
>torn xoxo

I agree with Torn apart, it's a great poem! I loved it, great job. Thanks for commenting on my poems, yea I'll have to write more. I love reading your comments, THANKS!

I agree wit them people... this poem is great but i dont know who wrote it ...but i love it thanks for putting it up :)
anyway hope to talk to u soon i emailed u back... hope u got it :)... talk soon
take care
xoxo robyn

Really sad, hope you dont experience that like i sometimes do. but then again, i play no role in life. ok forget about me. great poem cody and keep up the awesome work dude. ttyl.

Nice job, I really liked it, I can relate...

The poem is the divine comedy by Dante Alighieri great poem by the way..

MidNightBeauty has won she got it right and was the first one to do it finally it took long enough for someone to I was begging to think I would have to tell someone

I LOVE ALL YOUR POEMS! :) I knew the answer to the question, as I love The Divine Comedy! :) 5/5.

BTW, Cody I haven't read ALL of the Divine Comedy.... I can't quite do it. I'm kinda lazy! lol!

Argh how is this for fate i just finished reading the divine comedy by Dante and that isnt a lie i encourag everyone to read it cos it's amazing then you should read lolita by Vladmir Nabokov cos he refrences it a lot and lolita a great book as well anyway i've finished rambling lol chiaki xox

Also who won was it me? XD lol chiaki xox