WOW..I like this poem...its really..touching...you have a great writing skills..good poem. |
by sarah
This is a fantastic poem def got my 5 vote, great job, keep them coming and take care hun sarah x |
Now... We really need to talk....... |
What to say about this? I know where its coming from. If it was in my powers, I'd do anything to make you feel better. I get crushed to see that you hurt so much. Everything happens for a reason, its just not worth it to feel that your life is a waste for anyone. |
Wow, awesome Job. I loved it. The Flow was good. Very well written. Keep up the good work. |
Wow.....that was great!!! |
by Monique
Uhh.... wtf i hope this is just a poem... as princess love said in pain? what pain, u did not tell me anything:( well we will talk about that. but now gettngto the poem, beautiful, you portrayed ur thoughts and feelings in such a way that it makes teh reader feel ur sorrow.:) good job. |
Ooo very nicely done, love it |
by dora
Hey darl beautifully w0rded. that was really g0od. a t0uching piece. =] |
by Just Wishes
SO DESsperate and sad but beautifully written.5/5 |
I wonder how u come up with such a perfect writing... love this poem... really.. i wish this is my writing ^_^ |
by PURE HEART
Wow! superb.....gr8 job done Nitin. |
by Kristi
Very beautiful poem...many can relate |
by Lithium
Thats a great poem, ur use of words is excellent, it flows very nicely xox me |
by Renee Kotva
Another good one |
by ~*Nicki*~
5/5 i thought this poem was really good. It had a lot of emotion and you could tell you were not making it up. Great Job Hun! Please Please read some of my poems. Please and thanks |
Such personal emotion put forth into words. Wonderful write. |
by Adriana
This poem is so great..but its not a surprise to me all the poems i read so far from you are fantastic |
Hey. This is indeed the poem you won second place in my contest. I chose this to be one of the winners, just plain and simple because I adore it. |
by Cindy
Nitn |