I LOVE it!
So simple yet it gets to me...I don't know how to explain it lol
I like how you don't specify exactly what you're talking about....
great job!-xxx-

This flows well, i think from the word choice. keep writing, itll only get better.

Thats great..i kno how it feels to want to stay as u are and ppl try to "help"...it sux..very well written and i loved the begininng....thx for ur comment.
love ya lots,
sore