by anagha Apr 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It was before you that I survived, |
by Tara
This poem gets a good point across but i think maybe you should try to not have the lines rhyme an dmaybe do something different...ya know what I mean? it woudl be really good but It sounds mor elike you forced the rhyming and thats not what you want you want the poem to flow dont you? I really liked what it said though because everyone can relate to it!! Keep it up@!!! |