Wow, I've never seen this form of poetry before and I must say, I loved it! So touching, a wonderful write ^_^

Wow, Simon! This is heartbreaking!
"But please do me this
Take with you this shattered heart
Dispose of it how you will"
^^^ I love this stanza, excellent writing!

I really liked this poem becuz as i read on I felt like you were writing a short poem aboutmy life...well mybe not directly from my life...but most of us have been thete before...i know i have a couple times...
The only comfort that can be gained is that time will heal these wounds.
Beside you deserve way better than that anyways!

I love this poem, maybe because i can relate to the pain discribed in your poem. lovely choice of words and an excellent flow. :) X

Sad, yet beautiful. the last two stanzas are overpowering.

peace
shobhana