by Tanya Apr 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Have you ever walked in the streets or in school and wonder what it would be like if you had your love holding your hands again? |
I love this poem very much, im glad to of read it |
Well it seemed more like a story telling poem. but still it makes up some great content. try to rhyme it a little and make it flow. i do feel some amazing talent of poem writing in you. keep it up. and write more and more. good luck. |