Wow, great poem, speechless i specialy love the rhyme scheme. great meaning simple yet comlex my fav type of poem

Love it, keep it up :) 5/5

Aw joe awesome job hun! I loved it :)

look at the stars reflection on the water
as I seek you with this soft melody of mine

ESPECIALLY that line! really really sweet. keep it up hun *hugs* ruthie!

I love it!! so romantic!!! its sweet.
love ya lots
ray

The poem is so sweet :) n well writen well for my point of view :) keep up the awesome work Luv Metal Queen

A beautiful account. I loved the way you used certain words in repetition form. You grasp the reader well with the flow of your poem and the tone is constant. Great work, well done.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen*-

Awww VERY sweet i love it...dang why couldn't guys have a romantic side like you? gosh...

I love this, it's so sweet. I like the way it just flows as you read it. I really like your style of writing and the way the rhyme scheme fits in really well with the poem without throwing it off balance.

It's a really nice poem, it has a good rhyme scheme, Keep it up!

Hmm i love it!! thats the kind of thing i dream of, and u put it into words beautifully. wonderful imagery and closing lines

This is a very romantic and a unique poem, liked it all the way.

all the best and take care

Wow. That was an amazing poem - the flow was absolutely flawless. One thing . . .

are eyes meet

Should that be our eyes meet?

Anyway . . . other than that - awesome poetry, so deep. Very well written . .

Peace. [Sole]

Very lovely poem!! keep up the good work!!

Joe, that was beautiful emotion penned, good ryhme within lovely words, awesome!

love
gloria's glen

You make me feel so right
on such a beautiful night
being here with you
is such a delight

I loved the rhyming..it flowed smoothly..great job!
~Always4You~

Joe
i love it lots it realy gets u going
keep up the amazing work.
kate
ps am not one of ur freinds

This poem is so cute... is it about a certian some1?;)

This is a really sweet romantic poem. i love it. its an excellent write. i really love this part:

'look at the stars reflection on the water
as I seek you with this soft melody of mine'

Those two lines are amazing.
Great job.

I liked this poem uite a bit it had good flow excellent style and a theme that works nicely. i like the story it tells and the feeling it conveys. a powerful work for sure and an excellent one at that 5/5
~jacob

Awwwwwwww thats a great poem!!!!!!! i love it joe ur soo sweeet!!! :) keep up the good work