Comments : As She Slipped Away...

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Cool this was an excellent poem
    seroiusly

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayd

    Wonderfully described and well writen! Another perfectly woven poem, no matter what the style!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Really good =) well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Poppy

    Kool. touching

  • 18 years ago

    by zane

    Omg that is so good i love it and well yea i know a person like that. the sad crying part not the killing part

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    I like your style of poems, its really good. Great poem, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrittyLynne

    Hey big bro!

    I really like this poem... tink I'll go read some more of your work... <3