Intolerable

by Kayd   Apr 5, 2006


Carvings in flesh
let loose the river,
Crimson streams
of ecstasy.

Droplets covering the floor
walls, sink, mirror,
Everything staining
a solid red.

Pools of tears,
shattered glass and
blades lay tossed,
in the corner...

Covering the corpse
of a once felt love,
Which now rots
below it all.

Over hours were spent
planning such death,
smoked charcoal upon
white paper.

Plans of the unforgiving
scratches of pure truth,
Spoken only from the
mind and heart.

Now white to red
and red to black,
What was once light
is gone.

Cover the blood
cover the trash,
Then let burn the
intolerable pain.

*******************************
© KayD [2006]

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Marsha Robertson

    This is really a good poem... you did excellent on this one. nice grammar and vocabulary.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    This one was really good on your part. I could follow it all the way through to the end and picture your story played out in my head. Very powerful and almost chilling. Excellent poem overall. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Loved the imagery and simile. :)