by Kayd Apr 5, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Carvings in flesh |
This is really a good poem... you did excellent on this one. nice grammar and vocabulary. |
by Bri
This one was really good on your part. I could follow it all the way through to the end and picture your story played out in my head. Very powerful and almost chilling. Excellent poem overall. 5/5 |
Loved the imagery and simile. :) |