Dude, you are an absolutely AMAZING poet. theres no other way to put it. absolutely amazing...keep writing those awesome poems...

Awesome Job And im Diggin your Rhymes

You draw me in
your presance,
and keep me in
your essance.

That was like the bessssttt
Terrific Job
5/5
~TBOY~

I love how you continue off the other poem using the same emotion. And mostly the same style, makes it interesting and me wanting to hear more. Great job.