by Simon Hayes Apr 5, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Lightning hits a flowered green, |
by Tornia
This is a awsome poem. I love storms and how in the world do ppl think they are bad? this poem flows so smoothly.keep writing more great poems. :) |
by Lovely Bones
I adore this poem! Not only does it give you a beautiful picture in your head of something that is generally known as horrible, but it looks gorgeous to the eye as well. (I think I said that right) But anyways, I hope you caught the jest of what I meant. Lovely poem. Personally, I LOVE thunderstorms; they are incredible and I don't see how someone could hate them. But if I were one of those people, after reading this poem I would definately not be scared anymore =D |
by PS
Wow this is amazing. i absolutly love the middle two stanzas. its described so differently and its beautiful. :) |
by Darien
Very good imagery Simon! Loved it! |
by Laura
Cute poem I really liked it alot!!!!!! |