Now this makes a thunderstorm sound so pretty...... and I don't like thunderstorms, they are nasty... lol.... but this write is wonderful, very descriptive and flows so well.

This kind of makes me feel like wanting to be in the middle of a thunderstorm and watch all this happen. It makes such a dreadful thing sound so lovely. I love the mental picture I'm getting. Wonderful, wonderful poem, Simon. Spectacular write!

Cute poem I really liked it alot!!!!!!
5/5

Very good imagery Simon! Loved it!

Wow this is amazing. i absolutly love the middle two stanzas. its described so differently and its beautiful. :)

I adore this poem! Not only does it give you a beautiful picture in your head of something that is generally known as horrible, but it looks gorgeous to the eye as well. (I think I said that right) But anyways, I hope you caught the jest of what I meant. Lovely poem. Personally, I LOVE thunderstorms; they are incredible and I don't see how someone could hate them. But if I were one of those people, after reading this poem I would definately not be scared anymore =D

This is a awsome poem. I love storms and how in the world do ppl think they are bad? this poem flows so smoothly.keep writing more great poems. :)
~ Tornia

hey it would be cool if you checked out my poems too. :)