All you people

by xX-jess-Xx   Apr 5, 2006


All you people are hypocrites,
all your stories the same.
You say you're not like us,
not sucked into fame.

All you people are liars,
All your stories are stale.
You pretend to stand by us,
though you're certain we'll fail.

All you people are Bully's,
All your stories so tough.
You call us nice kids,
but thats not enough.

All you people are tense,
All your stories show,
You say you've not gotten old,
but you're afraid of letting go.

All you people make me laugh,
all your stories make me sigh.
You say that we don't listen,
but theres more than meets the eye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    All your stories the same.
    [[I think you should maybe say "All your stories are the same"]]

    I wasn't quite sure what this poem was meant to mean, but I did like the ending stanza alot. Keep it up.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Awesome poem i totally agree w/o a doubt! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    The repeating all, perfection. I really enjoyed reading your poem - it was so direct, and I think I understood it, but maybe I translated it to my own imagination . . .who knows :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    I disagree with the rest; it wasn't short it was long enough lol also very well written, liked the repeating "all" altough the poem has a good message the last line doesn't seem so powerfull as the rest though
    but still an amazing poem --> 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Great poem, powerful message to send out and so very true, I loved how you repeated "all", made the poem more intense...I would have loved to read more, it was kinda short, but amazing though =0)

    Much Love Sabrina

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