by xX-jess-Xx Apr 5, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
All you people are hypocrites, |
by Natalie
All your stories the same. |
Awesome poem i totally agree w/o a doubt! ^_^ |
by Sole
The repeating all, perfection. I really enjoyed reading your poem - it was so direct, and I think I understood it, but maybe I translated it to my own imagination . . .who knows :) |
by StefQ
I disagree with the rest; it wasn't short it was long enough lol also very well written, liked the repeating "all" altough the poem has a good message the last line doesn't seem so powerfull as the rest though |
Great poem, powerful message to send out and so very true, I loved how you repeated "all", made the poem more intense...I would have loved to read more, it was kinda short, but amazing though =0) |