Deep Depression

by Catherine   Apr 5, 2006


{This is a new poem and I'm still improving it, so please don't be harsh in comments, suggestions are good}

I wish I felt better
But I'm supposed to be sad
I do wonder why
My depression is so bad

My depression is saddening
But I really can't help it
Maybe I'll learn
To just except it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thank you! It's good to know someone out there know's how I feel. By the way, excellent poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cassi

    I lik its kinda short but if u not done its a pretty gd peom and ya i kno tht depression can be very confuzin i mean i dont even kno why im sad half the time lol oh and thanks for commenting me ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    It was dark... I think you got your mood across well. The only suggestions I would have is perhaps improve the flow?

    "I do wonder why
    My depression IS so sad"

    That adds a little flow...

    And i think you mean "accept"...

    Frankly, I liked it. Short, but powerful... that's a good poem. Good.

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    Lol

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