by ღMÅ‘Åŀŷ ĹůvÅ¡ Ũღ Apr 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She sits next to her windowsill, |
by ENTROPY
I love your poem, it inspires me to write more, i love how you repeated some phrases, and how you made it rhyme, it flows very well, thank you for your comments on my poem, write more! |
by Jenna Balkin
Wow, that was an excellant poem...It had an awesome finish and im a huge fan of good endings...it was a sad ending, but written well :) |
by meghan
Wow oh my gosh thats a really good poem and that really could make a person think of how much someone could care about them and what it could do to someone,keep writing the awsome peopms they are great!! |