Loves lonely rain

by ღMőŁŀŷ ĹůvÅ¡ Ũღ   Apr 5, 2006


She sits next to her windowsill,
Thinking about how much she loves him still.
She holds at that teddy bear,
On her face, is a blank stare.
He won it for her a while past,
Back when they thought their love would last.

Now she just sits next to the window,
& Watches loves lonely rain, come and go.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

She races down the road & turns the music real loud,
She looks up to the sky & sees the big rain cloud.
She tries him on his cell again,
She listens close, as the rings slowly end.

She hangs it up, and tears fill her eyes.
She never knew what lay ahead,
It took her by surprise.

Her sight was blurry, she couldn't see straight
Cause of the tears, and it was getting late.

So her car, took a sudden turn,
Not knowing she would never return.

Loves lonely rain, hits her body.
Her head is tilted ever so softly.
Next to her, is the teddy bare,
On her face, is a blank stare.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

They're dressed in black, standing in the pouring rain.
He knows now, it will never be the same.

If only he would have answered that stupid phone,
Maybe then, she could have made it home.

He set a single flower on the casket,
He still loved her, he couldn't fake it.
It was more than another,
Teenage romance,
But now everything, just sits in the past.

So now his laugh and smile he must again pretend,
Cause everythings gone,
It's really at an end.

So he looks at the teddy bear, & starts to cry.
He thinks about her,
and looks towards the sky.

He cries as love's lonely rain, pours down on him,
Knowing now, he'll never see her smile again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    I love your poem, it inspires me to write more, i love how you repeated some phrases, and how you made it rhyme, it flows very well, thank you for your comments on my poem, write more!
    your friend molly

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Wow, that was an excellant poem...It had an awesome finish and im a huge fan of good endings...it was a sad ending, but written well :)
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by meghan

    Wow oh my gosh thats a really good poem and that really could make a person think of how much someone could care about them and what it could do to someone,keep writing the awsome peopms they are great!!

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