Wow oh my gosh thats a really good poem and that really could make a person think of how much someone could care about them and what it could do to someone,keep writing the awsome peopms they are great!!

Wow, that was an excellant poem...It had an awesome finish and im a huge fan of good endings...it was a sad ending, but written well :)
5/5

I love your poem, it inspires me to write more, i love how you repeated some phrases, and how you made it rhyme, it flows very well, thank you for your comments on my poem, write more!
your friend molly