by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT Apr 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Im drunk on loneliness, |
Great poem! You expressed your emotions really well and I like the parallel structure in it at the beginning---My favorite lines are the last too. They make the poem more powerful and summed it up nicely. You have a lot of talent so keep writing! 5/5 |